the whirl on the street ~ the whirl on the street ( teerts eht no lriwh eht ) … swan way brains merge slow school left then fork so don’t drink phone off belt up sieve way barge in park up pull out foot down breeze off lane snakes check brakes bus stop car wash ad breaks sharp burn cross bridge wait train freight flash scratch breath bend round horn sound scree red glow green that’s it bleep right speed kills sleep tight … Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading...
I love this poem. It is very reminiscent to E. E. Cummings in my opinion. Excellent piece written with eloquence, honesty and beauty. So evocative. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply June 24, 2020 at 3:03 pm
i don’t know that much of his work but i think he was a proper poet so thank you LikeLiked by 1 person Reply June 24, 2020 at 3:34 pm
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I love this poem. It is very reminiscent to E. E. Cummings in my opinion. Excellent piece written with eloquence, honesty and beauty. So evocative.
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i don’t know that much of his work
but i think he was a proper poet
so thank you
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