brown cow critique

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brown cow critique ( a shortz rantz poem ( z ) )





is this a poem?

well how about now?

yeah but it rhymes

how now brown cow?


as i'm not a cow

unyoked of the plough

then or swine-inclined

un-boared of the sow


as birds chirp aloud

on branches of bough

flightier than thou

quite trite brown cow


so stick it where suns

don't shine brown cow

sweat forms on brow

i throw in my towel

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